Thursday, September 24, 2009

Draft Press Release 3: Cause Promotion

For Immediate Release

September 24, 2009
Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA)
Preston Parker, president
661-772-7537
http://www.cvaia.com/

Cache Valley Area Investors Association is created
New Association’s Goal is to Teach Financial Independence


LOGAN, UT – Cache Valley Area Investors Association is a new club that has the goal teaching others how to achieve financial independence. Preston Parker, president of the association, wants others to rely on passive income as a way of living to enjoy their jobs and lives.

CVAIA’s meetings are held every other Thursday at 7:00 p.m. at 160 N. Main St. in Logan. Guest speakers are invited to come and speak. “These are experts that talk to you about whatever you want to ask them,” Parker said.

Parker recommends become literate before attending meetings. Books like Rich Dad poor Dad by Robert Kyosak about not going through life with blinders on to Ayn Rand by Atlas Shrug about people suppressing others to advance are two of the books recommended on the website. “Read these books and your mind and your eyes will be opened at the possibility of potential,” Parker said. Other authors include Suze Orman, Dave Ramsey and Clark Howard.

Parker said the problem lies within understanding finances. “The underlying biggest problem with financial independence is people not understanding what it is and how to get it,” Parker said.Parker started CVAIA because he wants others to be satisfied with their jobs, especially in America where the law of abundance is clear. “I want people to be happy and a whole lot of people are complaining about their jobs,” Parker said.

Media Contact:
Mackenzie LovePR Specialist
mackenzie.love@aggiemail.usu.edu
801-726-1194

Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) teaches people how to increase passive income. CVAIA embraces the Law of Attraction, Law of Abundance, and Law of Exchange. They practice the methods found in the ideologies of books including Rich Dad Poor Dad, the wealthy barber, the millionaire next door, atlas shrugged, the automatic millionaire and the secret. CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geographical locations from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risk of investing. .

7 comments:

  1. Wow. I'm impressed how much pertinent information you wrote before we had to post. I admire you: you think quick on your feet. Just a heads up, in your title and lede, the association was created two years ago, it's not a new club. It's not actually focusing on the creation, rather, the promotion. Awesome job!

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  2. Awesome. I am impressed that you were able to put both boiler plates in your press release in such a short amount time. You were able to get the information out and have it make sense. Oh, and to go with Amanda's comment the club is not new and the first letter of each word should be capitalized. Overall, good job. I think your final should be great!

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  3. I thought you did a really good job with this especially with adding a second boiler point. Good work.

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  4. I liked the two boiler plates I really like how you incorporated them.

    I would encourage you to take the creation of the organization out of your title since CVAIA was established 2 years ago.

    I liked that you included a quote in your draft I was not fast enough to do that.

    Great work!

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  5. Great job including all the information! Your boilerplate was very detailed. One small thing I noticed in your third paragraph, first sentence: "Parker recommends become literate before attending meetings." I think you may need to add "to become literate" or change up the wording a little. Overall, it was great!

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  6. I am going to agree with everyone! You did a great job getting so much in such a short amount of time! I think everyone else covered the small changes that need to be made. Just proofread it and go to work girl!

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  7. I'm just going to throw this out there and say that I think you are one of the best press release writers in our class! You have an excellent way of disseminating information and making it easy to absorb. I knew when the meetings were, what they were about, who could come, and what the point of the club was--all of the essentials. Nice work.

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